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写作语汇技巧(三)[1]SAT
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(四)动词形式不正确

考生容易犯的错误还有对动词在不同地方使用的形式把握不清,有的应该使用动名词的,却直接用了动词原形,有的应该使用过去分词的,却是用了动名词。考生需注意以下几点:固定搭配中的动词形式;动名词或动词不定式可以作主语;不同时态、语态中的动词形式。虚拟语气也是写作中容易出错的地方,主要是由于考生在写作中没有使用虚拟语气的意识。所以,在平时考生应该加强对虚拟语气的了解,注意虚拟语气中动词的使用。

1、Original: So take all the above factors into account,I may not quite agree with the opinion that parents are our best teaches.

Revised:So,taking all of the above factors into account,I do not agree with the opinion that parents are our best teachers.

本段开头的so take all… 本应该是伴随状语成分,但作者直接用了动词原形,这是错误的,应该和主句的主语I保持逻辑一致,是作者把以上的因素考虑在内的。除此以外,原句中作者为能明确表明自己的立场,把may not quite agree改为do not agree。

2、Original:We can enjoy the art of cuisine in cooking rather than tolerating the time-consuming preparation.

Revised: We can enjoy the art of cooking rather than simply tolerate the time-consuming preparation.

rather than的前后用此应保持一致,此处rather than后的用词要与其前面的动词原形enjoy保持一致,故将tolerating改为tolerate。原句中还有一个用此问题,cuisine本意为“烹饪”,与in cooking冲突,故只保留一个cooking即可。

3、Original:Drink water with hygiene will certainly benefit the local folks a lot.

Revised:Drinking clean water will certainly benefit the local population.

原句动名词作主语,将drink该为drinking。原句中还有词汇表达问题:干净的水用clean water表达恰当,不用water with hygiene。

4、Original:The rapid development of science and technology has lead to an increasing need for more relaxation in off-work time.

Revised:The rapid development of modern economies has led to an increasing need for more relaxation in off-work time.

原句中lead在现在完成时中应该用过去分词,应该为led。

5、Original:CCTV 10 is such a channel intended to teach people...

Revised:CCTV 10 is a channe that teaches people...

原句中的intend不应用过去分词的形式。

6、Original:They keep focused on money while friends and families slip away.

Revised:They keep focusing on money while friends and families slip away.

focus(聚焦、集中于)此处应该用动名词形式,keep doing“一直做某事”,keep focusing on。

(五)名词的单复数、冠词的使用

1、Original:a even brighter future

Revised:an evSAT