2010年10月9日SAT考试：写作范文(1)[1]
2010年10月9日SAT考试：写作范文(1)[1]SAT
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2010年10月9日SAT作文成文 （范文一）
开头段：三句话写作法
1 观点
I prefer adjusting ourselves to new circumstances to remaining unchanged.
2 解释观点=提炼例子中的为什么 （选择式任务要体现出比较）
On some occasions, you have no way but to change yourself for new circumstances like cancer if you still have a dream yet to be realized. （改变的优点）
On the contrary, if you refuse to gear yourself towards new circumstances, hardly can you survive, let alone realizing dreams.（不改变的缺点）
3 下文的结构提示
The story of Lance Armstrong, an American cyclist who overcame a deadly cancer, could well exemplify my point.
中间段
目的：把已经准备好的逻辑链条变成英文，注意两点
1） 细节
2） 适时点题
第一步：曾经的他
Raised in a single-parent family, Lance Armstrong lived with his mother for over 19 years until he found our his talent for cycling and decided to move out on his own so that he could join the American national cycling team under coach Chris Carmichael. However, he exhibited somewhat traits of a teenager who lacked parental love, such as rudeness and egoism. （点出曾经的性格）
To be more specific, in 1990 Amateur World Championship in Japan, he ignored the suggestion of his coach Chris that he was supposed to save energy before the final charge. Actually, at that time, he quickly pedaled to a big lead in order to show up before all the competitors. However that charge consumed him too much energy. Finally, he finished eleventh. （点出这人不听别人建议）
What’s worse, he didn’t’t give his opponents any respect. Instead, he would shout at them and insult them during races. In response other riders sometimes got in his way on purpose and tried to slow him down. （点出这人很粗鲁）
第二步 得了癌症
However, unfortunately, he was almost sentenced to death by his doctor in 1996 when he informed Lance that he suffered from testicular cancer. At the beginning, he was unable to face the music since he was alwaySAT
2010年10月9日SAT作文成文 （范文一）
开头段：三句话写作法
1 观点
I prefer adjusting ourselves to new circumstances to remaining unchanged.
2 解释观点=提炼例子中的为什么 （选择式任务要体现出比较）
On some occasions, you have no way but to change yourself for new circumstances like cancer if you still have a dream yet to be realized. （改变的优点）
On the contrary, if you refuse to gear yourself towards new circumstances, hardly can you survive, let alone realizing dreams.（不改变的缺点）
3 下文的结构提示
The story of Lance Armstrong, an American cyclist who overcame a deadly cancer, could well exemplify my point.
中间段
目的：把已经准备好的逻辑链条变成英文，注意两点
1） 细节
2） 适时点题
第一步：曾经的他
Raised in a single-parent family, Lance Armstrong lived with his mother for over 19 years until he found our his talent for cycling and decided to move out on his own so that he could join the American national cycling team under coach Chris Carmichael. However, he exhibited somewhat traits of a teenager who lacked parental love, such as rudeness and egoism. （点出曾经的性格）
To be more specific, in 1990 Amateur World Championship in Japan, he ignored the suggestion of his coach Chris that he was supposed to save energy before the final charge. Actually, at that time, he quickly pedaled to a big lead in order to show up before all the competitors. However that charge consumed him too much energy. Finally, he finished eleventh. （点出这人不听别人建议）
What’s worse, he didn’t’t give his opponents any respect. Instead, he would shout at them and insult them during races. In response other riders sometimes got in his way on purpose and tried to slow him down. （点出这人很粗鲁）
第二步 得了癌症
However, unfortunately, he was almost sentenced to death by his doctor in 1996 when he informed Lance that he suffered from testicular cancer. At the beginning, he was unable to face the music since he was alwaySAT