请帮我看看下面的英语自我介绍短文有没有错误存在,This is me!My name is Deng Jingyi.I am 13 years old.I was born in Jiangyin.I came from Chengnan Primary School.I am not very tall.I don’t wear glass.I have black eyes and my hair

请帮我看看下面的英语自我介绍短文有没有错误存在,This is me!My name is Deng Jingyi.I am 13 years old.I was born in Jiangyin.I came from Chengnan Primary School.I am not very tall.I don’t wear glass.I have black eyes and my hair
请帮我看看下面的英语自我介绍短文有没有错误存在,
This is me!
My name is Deng Jingyi.I am 13 years old.I was born in Jiangyin.I came from Chengnan Primary School.
I am not very tall.I don’t wear glass.I have black eyes and my hair is frizzly.I am an outgoing and ively girl.I hope we could be good friends!
I love dancing very much.I always study it at the weekends.I like reading,too.I think reading is very interesting.I am good at Art and Music.So I like drawing and listening to music.And I don’t do well in Maths.
everyone is very pleased to spend three years of junior secondary school life.I am looking forward to the future and we've gone through life,hoping to a better understanding as we,together with all progress,share fun,grow together.We're going to fuel toward their goal!
This is me!

请帮我看看下面的英语自我介绍短文有没有错误存在,This is me!My name is Deng Jingyi.I am 13 years old.I was born in Jiangyin.I came from Chengnan Primary School.I am not very tall.I don’t wear glass.I have black eyes and my hair
came改为come；at改为on

My name is Deng Jingyi.I am 13 years old.I was born in Jiangyin. I came from Chengnan Primary School.
I am not very tall.I don’t wear glass.I have black eyes and my hair is frizzly. I am an outgoi...

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My name is Deng Jingyi.I am 13 years old.I was born in Jiangyin. I came from Chengnan Primary School.
I am not very tall.I don’t wear glass.I have black eyes and my hair is frizzly. I am an outgoing and lively girl.I hope we could be good friends!
I love dancing very much.I always study it at the weekends.I like reading,too.I think reading is very interesting.I am good at Art and Music.So I like drawing and listening to music,but I don’t do well in Maths.
everyone is very pleased to spend three years of junior secondary school life. I am looking forward to the future and we've gone through life, hoping to a better understanding as we, together with all progress, share fun, grow together. We're going to fuel toward our goal!
没什么大问题，改了一点。

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