correct one sentence,i'm waiting on lineOne recent investigation conducted by officials at a university reveals that 70 percent students anttend university for a good job,25 percent for interesting,3 percent accounding to their parents.这句话有
correct one sentence,i'm waiting on lineOne recent investigation conducted by officials at a university reveals that 70 percent students anttend university for a good job,25 percent for interesting,3 percent accounding to their parents.这句话有
correct one sentence,i'm waiting on line
One recent investigation conducted by officials at a university reveals that 70 percent students anttend university for a good job,25 percent for interesting,3 percent accounding to their parents.
这句话有什么错误?如何修改更native?
correct one sentence,i'm waiting on lineOne recent investigation conducted by officials at a university reveals that 70 percent students anttend university for a good job,25 percent for interesting,3 percent accounding to their parents.这句话有
总体不错,稍作修改.attend 和 according to替换了下,
One recent investigation conducted by officials at a university reveals that 70 percent students admitted university for a good job,25 percent for interest,3 percent for their parents.
Interesting是形容词 应该用名词interest
One recent investigation conducted by officials at a university reveals that 70 percent students attend university for a good job, 25 percent for interest, 3 percent according to their parents.
更正应该是interest，你吧according拼写错了吧！
文中有几处错误，已改正：
One recent investigation conducted by officials at a university reveals that 70 percent students attend university for a good job, 25 percent for(interest), 3 percent according to their parents.
错误在于不能用interesting，而应该用名词interest