谁能帮我修改这两句话1.first,we are in good mood to watch korean movies .Besides,we will learn a lot of culture and custom if we watch korean movies.2.disadvantages is that it is bad for our eye-sight spend much time in watching korean movie
谁能帮我修改这两句话1.first,we are in good mood to watch korean movies .Besides,we will learn a lot of culture and custom if we watch korean movies.2.disadvantages is that it is bad for our eye-sight spend much time in watching korean movie
谁能帮我修改这两句话
1.first,we are in good mood to watch korean movies .Besides,we will learn a lot of culture and custom if we watch korean movies.
2.disadvantages is that it is bad for our eye-sight spend much time in watching korean movies.To make matters worse,watching korean moving have a bad effect on our brain .
3.disadvantages is that spend more time not only bad for our eye-sight but also brain
大意为;第一看韩剧我们可以或得好心情,和学到一些有关韩国的文化知识和风俗.2.3句意是;不好的方面是,花太多时间去看韩剧会眼,脑不好
谁能帮我修改这两句话1.first,we are in good mood to watch korean movies .Besides,we will learn a lot of culture and custom if we watch korean movies.2.disadvantages is that it is bad for our eye-sight spend much time in watching korean movie
1:first,we can have joys to watch korean movies.and we can learn about some korean culture from the movies.
2,3.The bad way is,it's very harmful to eyes and brain because of watching too much korean movies.
besides 的用法错了
你这里要用的是 moreover, furthermore 之类的
如果要用besides,就不用逗号
besides the fact that we could learn ....
disadvantages is ? are 才对
bad for our eye-sight spend(ing) (too) much time
1.Firstly,we are in good mood to watch korean movies .Besides,we will learn a lot of culture and custom if we watch korean movies.
2.The disadvantage is that it is bad for our ey sight if we spen...
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1.Firstly,we are in good mood to watch korean movies .Besides,we will learn a lot of culture and custom if we watch korean movies.
2.The disadvantage is that it is bad for our ey sight if we spent too much time in watching movies. To make matter worse,watching Korean movies has a bad effect on our brain.
3.It is bad not only for our eye sight but also brain to spend more time in watching movies, which the disadvantages lie in.
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