哪位高人能帮我看看我的英语自我介绍有没有语法问题,帮我改改Good afternoon,teachers.I'm very glad to introduce my self here.My name is xxxx.I'm a lovely girl.I'm a x years old.I'm a student of Shi Yan primary school.I'm a Cla
哪位高人能帮我看看我的英语自我介绍有没有语法问题,帮我改改Good afternoon,teachers.I'm very glad to introduce my self here.My name is xxxx.I'm a lovely girl.I'm a x years old.I'm a student of Shi Yan primary school.I'm a Cla
哪位高人能帮我看看我的英语自我介绍有没有语法问题,帮我改改
Good afternoon,teachers.I'm very glad to introduce my self here.My name is xxxx.I'm a lovely girl.I'm a x years old.I'm a student of Shi Yan primary school.I'm a Class Two Great Six.I like my class very much.In my class ,we help each other,we learn together.I'm very happy.I like reading,playing games and lestening to music.I also like learning,especially learning English.Because English is very interesting,I study English hard ,so my English is very good.I believe that I well do well in the future.Iwon't let you down.Thanks for your listening.
哪位高人能帮我看看我的英语自我介绍有没有语法问题,帮我改改Good afternoon,teachers.I'm very glad to introduce my self here.My name is xxxx.I'm a lovely girl.I'm a x years old.I'm a student of Shi Yan primary school.I'm a Cla
第一行 myself应该连起来.
第二行 old 后面应该有一个girl 班级class前“a”改成"in"
第三行 help each other后的逗号改成and
第五行 interesting后逗号变成句号
最后一行 i well 改成 i will ,do well 改成do better i won't 要分开写
I'm a x years old 没有a
.I'm in Class Two Great （Grade）Six
I well do well改成will
do well in 需要后面加宾语不能单独使用
.Iwon't let you down.去掉就可以
第一行，myself中间不空格。
第二行Primary School。i am in Class Two, Gread Six.
English is very interesting and useful. 如果是演讲稿，最后一行的down用 i wont make you disappointed with me. 会更好。
第2句得改成“ Here I am pleased to introduce myself！”比较通顺\7
第9句的“We learn together”必须改成“ I'm glad we learn together ”\7
你的倒数第二句的“ Iwon't let you down ”改成“ I Won't let you down ”\7
都只是一些词语排列错误