那位高人帮我看看这段英文有什么语法错误!Recently,it was significantly increasing that many travelers from different places prefer to join dragon boat event in China for vacation annually.For instance,there were 10,000 visitors who w
那位高人帮我看看这段英文有什么语法错误!Recently,it was significantly increasing that many travelers from different places prefer to join dragon boat event in China for vacation annually.For instance,there were 10,000 visitors who w
那位高人帮我看看这段英文有什么语法错误!
Recently,it was significantly increasing that many travelers from different places prefer to join dragon boat event in China for vacation annually.For instance,there were 10,000 visitors who were dragon boat competitors and their families,and spectator were attracted to Hong Kong to participate in the event in 2003 .
那位高人帮我看看这段英文有什么语法错误!Recently,it was significantly increasing that many travelers from different places prefer to join dragon boat event in China for vacation annually.For instance,there were 10,000 visitors who w
第一句话不用it,因为没有上下文,看到it,不能一目了然知道it指代的什么
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there was a great growth in the number of travelers from different places who like to join the annually boat event in China during their vacation.For instance ,there were 10,000 visitors ,as well as their families,were attracted to Hong Kong to compete in the event in 2003.
第一句话：不用it，那其中表示不同，应该用 bedifferent from，而不是be from different 。