一道gmat改错题,为什么选c啊,主要纠结b为什么错.Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power,while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.划线部分从while到最后.A.\x05while in Germany it is just ove

一道gmat改错题,为什么选c啊,主要纠结b为什么错.Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power,while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.划线部分从while到最后.A.\x05while in Germany it is just ove
一道gmat改错题,为什么选c啊,主要纠结b为什么错.
Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power,while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.
划线部分从while到最后.
A.\x05while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
B.\x05compared to Germany,which uses just over 33 percent
C.\x05whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
D.\x05whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany
E.\x05compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany,where it is just over 33 percent

一道gmat改错题,为什么选c啊,主要纠结b为什么错.Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power,while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.划线部分从while到最后.A.\x05while in Germany it is just ove
这里其他选项最大的不足就是没指出33%到底是指谁的33%,容易出现歧义.而C无此歧义.
这里B 的compared to Germany 这个状语的逻辑主语从语法上将应该是主句的主语Over 75 percent of the energy ,而逻辑上来看应该是France(国与国比较,比较对象才具有可比性).所以不妥.且后面的33percent的从属模糊,谁的33%?
A中GMAT中while作对比意思的连词则要求前后句子结构一致.
D中有歧义,因为不清楚是指法国33%的和能源来自于德国还是指德国能源33%是核能源?(C中结构与前并列很好的排除这种歧义)
E中的it同样存在百分比从属问题,他说德国的核能源占谁的33%呢?

我觉得33%指代不明吧，是uses nuclear power，还是energy呢，不明确。

uses 不对

是used和produced对不上