修改下面4个有点困难的错句~1.That the time will come when the last pink flamingo has stood in the flowing waters of the river looking for fish.2.Children sometimes misbehave just to test their elders parents should discipline them on those

修改下面4个有点困难的错句~1.That the time will come when the last pink flamingo has stood in the flowing waters of the river looking for fish.2.Children sometimes misbehave just to test their elders parents should discipline them on those
修改下面4个有点困难的错句~
1.That the time will come when the last pink flamingo has stood in the flowing waters of the river looking for fish.
2.Children sometimes misbehave just to test their elders parents should discipline them on those occasions.
3."Hamlet" is a moving play by Shakespeare that tells of a prince who has difficulties making up his mind to avenge his father who was brutally murdered on a cold wintry night.
4.Each musician who plays in the orchestra which performs regularly at the Victoria Theatre that is near Parliament house has at lease ten years of professional experience acquired through consistent practice and performance.
虽然句子比较长..
.因为是初中水平的..
希望大家帮忙指出来错的地方并且做相应的修改..

修改下面4个有点困难的错句~1.That the time will come when the last pink flamingo has stood in the flowing waters of the river looking for fish.2.Children sometimes misbehave just to test their elders parents should discipline them on those
第一句中waters应该改为water,因为水是不可数的
第二句中elders应该改为elder
第三句中play by 中间加written,tells of a prince 中of去掉,tells of a prince 后边加that,difficulties making 中间加in,
第四句中at lease 中lease应该改为least

1 waters s去掉
2 elders s去掉
3 making 改为 to make
4 不知道
我水平也不行，仅作参考

1.开头的that去掉。
2.在parents 和should之间加上who.
3.把Shakespeare that tells中的that改为which.
4.把which performs regularly中的which改为who