BEC作文悬赏求批改The bar chart evidently depicted the comparison of the contributions of the three products,washing machines,cookers and heaters,in realms of the percentages of a particular company’s turnover in three successive years of 200

BEC作文悬赏求批改The bar chart evidently depicted the comparison of the contributions of the three products,washing machines,cookers and heaters,in realms of the percentages of a particular company’s turnover in three successive years of 200
BEC作文悬赏求批改
The bar chart evidently depicted the comparison of the contributions of the three products,washing machines,cookers and heaters,in realms of the percentages of a particular company’s turnover in three successive years of 2000,2001 and 2002.
Refering to the percentage of turnover contributed by washing machines,it climbed at a steady speed of 2% per year from 30% (2000) to 32% (2001) to 34% (2002).
Focusing our attention on the percentage of turnover involving heaters,a downward trend was clearly recognizable.It declined from 16% (2000) to 14% (2001) to 7% in rough (2002) during the three years.Compared to the second year,it collapsed more sharply in the third year.
When it comes to the percentage of turnover contributed by heaters,it recovered to 2000’s level in 2002,after it had suffered from the decrease from 22 % (2000) to 20% (2001).
BEC作文考得好差啊,自己又改不出来,等我赚到更多的分分,还有额外送啊!
楼下的是在翻译吗?我不要翻译啊,帮我改作文!
资料就谢过不用了!不改可拿不到奖励的分分哦
如果看资料能搞定就不求各位高手了
四楼的是来找DA的吧!
三楼的谢谢你的建议和鼓励啊.不过,我最关心的是语法错误,词法错误,

BEC作文悬赏求批改The bar chart evidently depicted the comparison of the contributions of the three products,washing machines,cookers and heaters,in realms of the percentages of a particular company’s turnover in three successive years of 200
1."the European county"
2."$7bn"
3.最后一句,时态不统一,“Thought the discrepancy was large,it stayed the same throughout ten years”
样板是对的.要注意一下时态的一致性.句子可以再写的简短一些.因为BEC作文是“扣分”法,所以句子简短可以避免出现小错误或者逻辑上的错误.