After graduation,he even couldn't find the job he dreamed,but he didn't give up his dream.这句话有什么语法问题吗?

After graduation,he even couldn't find the job he dreamed,but he didn't give up his dream.这句话有什么语法问题吗?
After graduation,he even couldn't find the job he dreamed,but he didn't give up his dream.
这句话有什么语法问题吗?

After graduation,he even couldn't find the job he dreamed,but he didn't give up his dream.这句话有什么语法问题吗?
第一个dreamed后面应该加上about或of；the job应该换成a job.

虚拟语气，利用了假设的方法。

应该是dream 不能做及物动词，所以要加个介词of