Of all the 40 students in this class,20 students are girls,20 students are boys and all have toys从语法角度讲这句话对吗?怎么改呢重点是20 students are girls,20 students areboys 这两句话各是个完整的句子啊。能这样用

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Of all the 40 students in this class,20 students are girls,20 students are boys and all have toys从语法角度讲这句话对吗?怎么改呢重点是20 students are girls,20 students areboys 这两句话各是个完整的句子啊。能这样用
Of all the 40 students in this class,20 students are girls,20 students are boys and all have toys
从语法角度讲这句话对吗?怎么改呢
重点是20 students are girls,20 students areboys 这两句话各是个完整的句子啊。能这样用吗?

Of all the 40 students in this class,20 students are girls,20 students are boys and all have toys从语法角度讲这句话对吗?怎么改呢重点是20 students are girls,20 students areboys 这两句话各是个完整的句子啊。能这样用
首先,20 students are boys是多余的.前面部分已经暗含了这一句的意思在内了,一个人不是男的,就是女的,不可能有第3种情况存在.
去掉多余的部分后,剩下的两个分句用and连接,就更容易让人接受.后面分句最好加上they做主语.

第二个20students重复了吧,改为the rest。
当然能,后面还有一句话呢,所以可以并列。

这个班里有40个学生,20个女孩,20个男孩,都有玩具

Of all the 40 ...与后面的all have toys有些冲突,最好分成两句:
Of all the 40 students in this class, half(“一半”,更简洁) are girls and half are boys.They all have toys.