The color of my lifeFirst ,I want to ask you a question .Do you have rainbow belong to you Maybe you can answer it for certain ,then listen to me carefully .After listening ,you’ll have some thoughts about this question.One day ,father asks me a st

The color of my lifeFirst ,I want to ask you a question .Do you have rainbow belong to you Maybe you can answer it for certain ,then listen to me carefully .After listening ,you’ll have some thoughts about this question.One day ,father asks me a st
The color of my life
First ,I want to ask you a question .Do you have rainbow belong to you Maybe you can answer it for certain ,then listen to me carefully .After listening ,you’ll have some thoughts about this question.
One day ,father asks me a strange question ,Sarah ,what is the color of your life I feel quite difficult to answer .Because in spring ,my life is green as grass root to grow from the ground to face the spring ,wind and rain ,challenging the world ;in Summer ,my life is pink and red as flowers to bloom joyfully ;in Autumn ,my life is golden as the rich fruits after long time growth ;in Winter ,my life is white and pure as the snow flakes falling and covers the whole ground white .Sometimes ,I feel the sky in blue when I am happy ,but it is dark and cloudy when I am sad ,such as when I lose game or a test.
What is the color of my life I finally have got my answer.My life is colorful,because I am not always happy and joyful,so it cant be shining colors forever.You should face and take it.Finally,I draw a picture to my dad,named “ the color of my life ”that is a happy and beautiful girl in pink dress playing and laughing on green grass full of colorful flowers,with seven colors rainbow high in the sky.
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The color of my lifeFirst ,I want to ask you a question .Do you have rainbow belong to you Maybe you can answer it for certain ,then listen to me carefully .After listening ,you’ll have some thoughts about this question.One day ,father asks me a st
不好意思,说几句不好听的.文章虽能够大体表达出作者的意思,而且也谈不上说有很大的语法错误而能引起歧义.但是,语言不通顺、不地道却是板上钉钉的.要改的地方太多,就不一一指出了.建议多多修改几遍吧.学无止境,改的越多,效果会越好.