I will take Li Ming there when he will come back.找出错误的选项,并改正.I will take Li Ming there when he will come back.Make sure that you will pick me up after work.

I will take Li Ming there when he will come back.找出错误的选项,并改正.I will take Li Ming there when he will come back.Make sure that you will pick me up after work.
I will take Li Ming there when he will come back.找出错误的选项,并改正.
I will take Li Ming there when he will come back.
Make sure that you will pick me up after work.

I will take Li Ming there when he will come back.找出错误的选项,并改正.I will take Li Ming there when he will come back.Make sure that you will pick me up after work.
will come 改成comes
主句用一般将来时,从句用一般现在时
that改成whether/if 既然是make sure确信,所以要用疑问的口气,是否.
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1.I will take Li Ming there when he comes back.
2.Make sure that you pick me up after work.
(在时间和条件状语从句中，要用一般现在是表示一般将来时)

I will take Li Ming there when he comes back.

I will take li ming there when he comes back
make sure that you pick me up after work

把when后的will去掉，come后加s