谁能帮我修改下面的一段英语短文,(1) As soon as Lilly returned home from the shop ,she began to make meat pies.When her fingers ware very sticky.the telephone rang,she spent nearly 5 mins in talking to Luss.After that,she looked at the m

谁能帮我修改下面的一段英语短文,(1) As soon as Lilly returned home from the shop ,she began to make meat pies.When her fingers ware very sticky.the telephone rang,she spent nearly 5 mins in talking to Luss.After that,she looked at the m
谁能帮我修改下面的一段英语短文,
(1) As soon as Lilly returned home from the shop ,she began to make meat pies.When her fingers ware very sticky.the telephone rang,she spent nearly 5 mins in talking to Luss.After that,she looked at the mess that she had made her fingers was covered with pastry.
(2)After putting the cake in the oven,i forgot all about it.when two hours had passed,i smelled sth buring,on going into the kitchen,i found it full of smoke.

谁能帮我修改下面的一段英语短文,(1) As soon as Lilly returned home from the shop ,she began to make meat pies.When her fingers ware very sticky.the telephone rang,she spent nearly 5 mins in talking to Luss.After that,she looked at the m
(1) As soon as Lilly returned home from the shop ,she began to make meat pies.When her fingers ware very sticky.the telephone rang,she spent nearly 5 mins talking to Luss.After that,she looked at the mess she found that she had made her fingers covered with pastry.
(2) i forgot all about it after putting the cake in the oven .almost when two hours had passed,i smelled sth buring,on going into the kitchen,i found it full of smoke

(1)As soon as Lilly returned home from the shop ,she began to make meat pies.When the telephone rang, she felt her hands were very sticky.niarly five minutes in talking to Luss.After that,she looked a...

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(1)As soon as Lilly returned home from the shop ,she began to make meat pies.When the telephone rang, she felt her hands were very sticky.niarly five minutes in talking to Luss.After that,she looked at the mess she found that her fingers were covered with pastry.
(2)i forgot all about it after i had put the cake in the oven. when two hours had passed, i smelled sth was burning. i went to the kitchen in which was full of smoke

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As soon as Lilly returned home from the shop ,she began to make meat pies.She made her fingers very sticky,at that time the telephone rang,she spent nearly 5 min in talking to Luss.After that,she look...

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As soon as Lilly returned home from the shop ,she began to make meat pies.She made her fingers very sticky,at that time the telephone rang,she spent nearly 5 min in talking to Luss.After that,she looked at the mess she found that her fingers were full of pastry.
(2)After putting the cake in the oven,I have forgot all about it.Two hours later,I smelled sth buring,on going into the kitchen,I found it was full of smoke.

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