请各位仔细看看下一篇演讲稿有没有语法或单词错误,What is friendship?It is to relate with somebody without need for money or objective.It is to need emotion and over wealth is friendship ,no matter what their background ,age ,sex

请各位仔细看看下一篇演讲稿有没有语法或单词错误,What is friendship?It is to relate with somebody without need for money or objective.It is to need emotion and over wealth is friendship ,no matter what their background ,age ,sex
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What is friendship?It is to relate with somebody without need for money or objective.It is to need emotion and over wealth is friendship ,no matter what their background ,age ,sex or personality.
Friendship can be pure.We hear ,nowdays,however,how one can be cheated by friends.Many people get along with someone because they have a lot of money.It is doultful that is real friendship.
Only mother love is true love .It's gives everybody everything in all his life ,When you
are still a baby ,mother takes good care of you as much as possible.In your waking hour she always holds you in her arms.When you are ill,she stop her work right now to look after
you day and night and forgets about herself.When you are growing up day by day,she feels
very happy.When you are old enough to go to school,mother still looks after you all the
time.On cold winter days,she always tells you to put on more clothes.She always stands
in the window waiting for you back from school.She usually knows about your study and
spends much money on your school things .When you do well at school .you will see the
brightset smile on her face.
Mother is ailways ready to give everything she has to her children ,not to receive.
What true love that is in the world We will remember Mother love forever.
Having friends,one can be find happiness.If you are in trouble your friends will help you through or at least comfort you.When you are happy ,they share it with you.They are also there for you to chat with at any time.
It is a wonderful feeling,as the proverb says" to love each other is easy but to make frieds is hard",So,it is crutial that we should get along with our friends.In my opinon ,it is a shame to deceive your friends .The world would be more beautiful if it was full of filled with friendship.

请各位仔细看看下一篇演讲稿有没有语法或单词错误,What is friendship?It is to relate with somebody without need for money or objective.It is to need emotion and over wealth is friendship ,no matter what their background ,age ,sex
It's gives everybody everything in all his life .改为It gives
She stop her work 改为She stops her work
you will see the brightset 改为brightest
one can be find happniess 去掉be
最后一句重复了,直接改为The world would be more beautiful if it was full of friendship.

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楼主写得很生动，It's gives everybody everything in all his life .改为It gives ~~
She stop her work 改为She stops her work
you will see the brightset 改为brightest
one can be find happniess 去掉be
最后一句重复了，直接改为The world would be more beautiful if it was full of friendship.

What is friendship? It is to relate with somebody without need for money or objective. It is to need emotion and over wealth is friendship , no matter what their background , age , sex or personality....

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What is friendship? It is to relate with somebody without need for money or objective. It is to need emotion and over wealth is friendship , no matter what their background , age , sex or personality.
Friendship can be pure. We hear , nowdays, however, how one can be cheated by friends. Many people get along with someone because they have a lot of money. It is doultful (doubtful) that (it) is (a) real friendship.
Only mother love is true love .It's(she will) gives(give) everybody(her children) everything in all his(she) life ,When you are still a baby ,mother takes good care of you as much as possible. In your waking hour she always holds you in her arms. When you are ill, she stop her work right now(away) to look after you day and night and forgets about herself. When you are growing up day by day, she feels very happy. When you are old enough to go to school, mother still looks after you all the time. On cold winter days, she always tells you to put on more clothes. She always stands in the window waiting for you back from school. She usually knows about your study and spends much money on your school things . When you do well at school . you will see the brightset smile (a bright smile) on her face.
Mother is ailways (always) ready to give everything she has to her children ,not to receive.
What true love that is in the world !We will remember Mother love forever.
Having friends, one can be find happiness. If you are in trouble your friends will help you through or at least comfort you. When you are happy , they share it with you. They are also there for you to chat with at any time.
It is a wonderful feeling, as the proverb says" to love each other is easy but to make frieds(friends) is hard", So, it is crutial that we should get along with our friends. In my opinon(opinion) ,it is a shame to deceive your friends . The world would be more beautiful if it was full of filled with friendship(the world would be more beautiful if it is filled with friend ship).
你写得很棒，但是可能大字太快说一大错一些字。然後感觉有点怪，开头讲友情，然後到母爱，突然闲又回到友情。 我建议你把友情放在一起，然後才回到母爱。

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