作业帮该用来举例子的英语长句是否正确?「In order to justify the view I have mentioned above,I can come up with no better illustration than the example below：people in mounting numbers are wasting food,on the contrary,a sea of people have b
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该用来举例子的英语长句是否正确?「In order to justify the view I have mentioned above,I can come up with no better illustration than the example below：people in mounting numbers are wasting food,on the contrary,a sea of people have b
该用来举例子的英语长句是否正确?
「In order to justify the view I have mentioned above,I can come up with no better illustration than the example below：people in mounting numbers are wasting food,on the contrary,a sea of people have been died for hungry.」请问高手们,这个用来做举例子用的句子是否正确?其中on the contrary插入是否正确?如果有误敬请帮助修改.
该用来举例子的英语长句是否正确?「In order to justify the view I have mentioned above,I can come up with no better illustration than the example below：people in mounting numbers are wasting food,on the contrary,a sea of people have b
大致上没有什麼问题,不过要注意：
1. have died of hunger (完成式have died, hunger名词)
不过我觉得你这句用are dying of hunger最好.
2. 如楼上说的 这里用while (或者whereas, 更强烈一点) 比on the contrary 或 in contrast 都要来得合适.(我没有把握一定只能这样) (用while 或whereas的话後面不用跟逗号)
因为你要表达的是一件事情的两面("转折"),不是两件完全独立的相反事件.
另外 一个小小的叮咛：
on the contrary, in contrast 还有however 都不能拿来连接两个完整的句子,所以你可以把前後两句分开 或者是用分号： (我们中文里面没有这个规则 也很少用分号)
People in mounting numbers are wasting food; on the contrary,a sea of people are dying of hunger.
写得很长,希望对你有帮助!加油!
On the contrary 用在这里感觉有点奇怪，换成while或者in contrast就好。建议修改如下：
In order to justify the view I have mentioned above I can come up with no better illustration than the example below：people in mounting numbers are wasting food，in contrast, millions have died of hunger.」
正确，表示转折，等于in another hand请问：（1）虽然表示转折。on the contrary前后这样两个独立意思的句子，可以因为插入语这样介入后，就放在一个句子里去表对比了吗？（2）如果为了表示顺承，把on the contrary 替换成 as a consequence可以吗？我认为，用however也行啊 我认为不是顺承关系，是表示转折...
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正确，表示转折，等于in another hand
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on the contrary 正相反 浪费食物的反面是不浪费吧
用“然而”好一点