作业帮求专业人士帮我改下作文,越快越好我英语作文不太好希望英语好的人帮帮忙,请指出错误并帮忙改正,my favourite animal is tiger and tiger is one of the most beautiful animals .people like watching it too.but in this w
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求专业人士帮我改下作文,越快越好我英语作文不太好希望英语好的人帮帮忙,请指出错误并帮忙改正,my favourite animal is tiger and tiger is one of the most beautiful animals .people like watching it too.but in this w
求专业人士帮我改下作文,越快越好我英语作文不太好希望英语好的人帮帮忙,请指出错误并帮忙改正,
my favourite animal is tiger and tiger is one of the most beautiful animals .people like watching it too.but in this world tigers will be exterminate there are only 3200 tigers now beacuse human are very cruel they need money so they kill them we must protect them we can give goverment an advice to protect tigers and punish the people who hurt them.
tigers are our friend so tigers must be protected.
写作要求是
1.老虎是人们在动物园最喜欢观看的动物之一
2.现在世界仅存大约3200只老虎,数目日趋减少
3老虎处境危险的原因
4保护老虎的建议
求专业人士帮我改下作文,越快越好我英语作文不太好希望英语好的人帮帮忙,请指出错误并帮忙改正,my favourite animal is tiger and tiger is one of the most beautiful animals .people like watching it too.but in this w
an advice to protect tigers and punish the people who hurt them去掉an ,因为advice是不可数名词
tigers are our friend 改friend为friends.