英语高手请进来改错啦This story is the most beautiful one i have ever seen.From it.i know,no things are not change.Grudge maybe change to miss.When youlost sth,you'll start to miss it.As if it's a bad things,aftera long time you maybe think

英语高手请进来改错啦This story is the most beautiful one i have ever seen.From it.i know,no things are not change.Grudge maybe change to miss.When youlost sth,you'll start to miss it.As if it's a bad things,aftera long time you maybe think
英语高手请进来改错啦
This story is the most beautiful one i have ever seen.From it.i know,no things are not change.Grudge maybe change to miss.When you
lost sth,you'll start to miss it.As if it's a bad things,aftera long time you maybe think you missed that time.

英语高手请进来改错啦This story is the most beautiful one i have ever seen.From it.i know,no things are not change.Grudge maybe change to miss.When youlost sth,you'll start to miss it.As if it's a bad things,aftera long time you maybe think
This story is the most beautiful one I have ever seen.From it,I know that no things will not change.Grudge may be changed to miss.When you lost sth,you'll start to miss it.Even is it's a bad thing,you may also think of it after a long time.

This story is the most beautiful one I have ever seen.From it, I know that nothing will be changed.Jealousness will change into miss. But when you lose it, you'll miss it.Although that is a bad thing, you are gonna to miss it as the days gone by.

· This story is the most beautiful one I have ever seen. From it, I know that now things will not change. Grudge may be changed to miss. When you lost sth, you'll start to miss it. Even as it's a bad thing, you may also think of it after a long time

第一句没错，From it.i know,no things are not change.不怎么通，no things这种说法不合规范，一般用nothing这一个单词就能代替，i应该大写，你这里面两个i都没大写，根据语意，没有什么事情是不会改变的，所以时态不对，应该用will,所以这句应该改为From it ，I know that nothing will not ch...

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第一句没错，From it.i know,no things are not change.不怎么通，no things这种说法不合规范，一般用nothing这一个单词就能代替，i应该大写，你这里面两个i都没大写，根据语意，没有什么事情是不会改变的，所以时态不对，应该用will,所以这句应该改为From it ，I know that nothing will not change.下一句Grudge maybe change to miss中maybe改成may比较好，后面的As if it's a bad things根据句意改为 Even it's a bad thing（即使是一件坏事）aftera long time you maybe think you missed that time中句意表达比较累赘，用after a long time you may miss that time.

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