作文,请求高人改语法错I believe that the extracurricular activities are very important for our students,especial during the teenage.At that time,their minds are very simple and very easy to be lead and change.If they were just always to be p

作文,请求高人改语法错I believe that the extracurricular activities are very important for our students,especial during the teenage.At that time,their minds are very simple and very easy to be lead and change.If they were just always to be p
作文,请求高人改语法错
I believe that the extracurricular activities are very important for our students,especial during the teenage.
At that time,their minds are very simple and very easy to be lead and change.If they were just always to be putting in the classroom and reading the books.How could them not to be a wooden mind?
Without extracurricular activities,their childhood would be dull.We know that the sweet memory during this time is so important for everybody.During my childhood,I was so eager to join a singing lecture or a summer camp,but there was no opportunity that time,it’s really a pity in my life,because even I would do it right now,my mind is entirely different.
Secondly,play is the instinct/天性of each child.If they are just staying in the classroom and reading the book in the whole day,whole week,they still will manage to play behind the parents,won’t they?Just like playing PC game or watching TV.Because there is nobody guide them to the right way to play.
If there are extracurricular activities,maybe they could find their hidden abilities,even not the aptitude.At least,they could increase our manu/动手 ability and learn about how to communicate each other.Nowadays,both parents and teachers hope that the students could be more independence,but how to make them independence?Extracurricular activities are the best way to create them,and it would not make them feel the pressure just like in the classroom,they could learn a lot with a happy and relax mind.

作文,请求高人改语法错I believe that the extracurricular activities are very important for our students,especial during the teenage.At that time,their minds are very simple and very easy to be lead and change.If they were just always to be p
I think that the extracurricular activities are very important for students,especial for the teenages.
During activity time,they feel relaxed.If they are always putting there mind's in reading books in classroom,they will lack active minds.
Without extracurricular activities,their childhood would be dull.We know that the sweet memory during childhood is very important for everybody.During my childhood,I was so eager to join a singing lecture or a summer camp,but there was no opportunity that time.It’s a real pity in my life.Because even I can also experience it now,but the feeling is absolutely different.
Secondly,playing is the instinct/天性of every child.If they are just reading the book in the classroom everyday,they will manage to play behind the parents,won’t they?Such as playing PC game or watching TV.Because no one can lead them the right way to play.
If they have sone extracurricular activities,maybe they could find their hidden abilities,even not the aptitude.At least,they could increase our manu/动手 ability and learn about how to communicate with each other.Nowadays,both parents and teachers hope that the students could be more independence,but how to make them more independence?Extracurricular activities is the best way to help them,and it will not make them feel the pressure just like in the classroom,they can learn more with a happy and relaxed mind.
[they will manage to play behind the parents,won’t they?没看懂.
翻译的还行,但注意以后不要照着汉语逐字翻译,要看哪个单词用在这更恰当
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这是我根据你的意思翻译的！
I believe, in the extracurricular activity is very important, especially for our students in teenagers.
Then, they thought is very simple, and can easily be guided and change. If...

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这是我根据你的意思翻译的！
I believe, in the extracurricular activity is very important, especially for our students in teenagers.
Then, they thought is very simple, and can easily be guided and change. If they can always put in the classroom and reading books. How can they were not a wooden idea?
No extra-curricular activities, their childhood may boring. We know the sweet memory in this period of time is very important. During my childhood, I would like to join a lecture or singing, but no chance of summer, what a pity, because if I'll do it right now, my mind is completely different.
Secondly, the script is instinct, every child of nature. If they only stay reading in the classroom, throughout the day, the whole week, they will still managed to play behind the parents, isn't he? Like playing computer games or watching television. Because there is no guide them to the correct way to play.
If has extracurricular activities, perhaps they will find their hidden ability, not even that. At least, they can increase our ability to communicate and learn ginobili (. Today, both parents and teachers hope students can more independent, but how to make their independence? Extracurricular activities is one of the best ways to create them, it is impossible to make them feel pressure, like in the classroom, can learn a lot of things, relaxed and happy heart

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