麻烦看下这段英文有没有语法错误I am a girl full of passion,a girl who love science,a girl who is all-round developed,a girl who enjoy living her life!

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麻烦看下这段英文有没有语法错误I am a girl full of passion,a girl who love science,a girl who is all-round developed,a girl who enjoy living her life!
麻烦看下这段英文有没有语法错误
I am a girl full of passion,
a girl who love science,
a girl who is all-round developed,
a girl who enjoy living her life!

麻烦看下这段英文有没有语法错误I am a girl full of passion,a girl who love science,a girl who is all-round developed,a girl who enjoy living her life!
a girl who love science,(love 改为 loves)
a girl who is all-round developed(建议改为 a girl who has been developed in an all-round way),因为 all-round 是形容词
a girl who enjoy living her life!(enjoy 改为 enjoys)
以上是语法上的一些个人建议.

love改成loves,enjoy改成enjoys

应该没有语法错误,但是最后一句改成enjoy her life 我觉得更好。