求救英语强人 给改下英语短文!语法拼写等格式An Unforgettable EventIt happened many years ago,when I was thirteen years old.It was a sunny day,and i walk along the road,in front of me,is a crossroad.a women who is a mother,riding a b

求救英语强人 给改下英语短文!语法拼写等格式An Unforgettable EventIt happened many years ago,when I was thirteen years old.It was a sunny day,and i walk along the road,in front of me,is a crossroad.a women who is a mother,riding a b
求救英语强人 给改下英语短文!语法拼写等格式
An Unforgettable Event
It happened many years ago,when I was thirteen years old.
It was a sunny day,and i walk along the road,in front of me,is a crossroad.a women who is a mother,riding a bicycle,with a little boy.They wanted through the intersection.the speed is not fast.Intersection without traffic lights in rural seemed to be different from the town.That might cause a lot of tragedy.As I said,a truck loaded with goods also passed through junction.Suddenly,they hit together.the child's mother fell in a pool of blood,Luckily the boy was not injured,frightened cry randomly.Soon,the ambulance came.The mother was taken to the hospital.After a few days I heard that the mother died.What a tragedy.Life is fragile!
Now,I would be very careful when crossing the road.If we all pay attention to safety,they would have avoided a lot of traffic.Also,if rural crossroads traffic lights are installed,will prevent several accidents.

求救英语强人 给改下英语短文!语法拼写等格式An Unforgettable EventIt happened many years ago,when I was thirteen years old.It was a sunny day,and i walk along the road,in front of me,is a crossroad.a women who is a mother,riding a b
An Unforgettable Event
It happened many years ago,when I was thirteen years old.
It was sunny day.I walk along the road,and came across a crossroad.a mother was riding a bicycle,with a little boy.They wanted cross the intersection.the speed is not fast.Intersections without traffic lights in rural seemed to be different from those of the town.those intersections might cause a lot of tragedy.As I have said,a truck loaded with goods also passed through junction.Suddenly,the truck hit the mother with her boy and she fell in a pool of blood.Luckily the boy was not injured,but was frightened to cry desparately.Soon,the ambulance came.The mother was taken to the hospital.After a few days,I heard that the mother died.What a tragedy.Life is fragile!
Now,I would be very careful when crossing the road.If we all pay attention to safety,we could have avoided a lot of tragedies.Also,if rural crossroads traffic lights are installed,they will prevent several accidents.

An Unforgettable Event
It happened many years ago, when I was thirteen years old.
It was a sunny day, and i walk along the road,in front of me,is a crossroad.
改：It was a sunny...

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An Unforgettable Event
It happened many years ago, when I was thirteen years old.
It was a sunny day, and i walk along the road,in front of me,is a crossroad.
改：It was a sunny day. I walked along the road when it is a crossroad in front of me.
a women who is a mother,riding a bicycle, with a little boy.They wanted through the intersection.the speed is not fast.Intersection without traffic lights in rural seemed to be different from the town.That might cause a lot of tragedy.As I said,a truck loaded with goods also passed through junction.
改：A woman rode, with a little boy back at her bicycle, through the intersection which had no traffic lights in rural when a truck loaded with lots of goods come on.
Suddenly, they hit together.the child's mother fell in a pool of blood,Luckily the boy was not injured,frightened cry randomly.Soon, the ambulance came.The mother was taken to the hospital.After a few days I heard that the mother died.What a tragedy.
改：Terriblely,they hit each other.The mom fell off the bicycle and down into the pool of blood.But luckily,the little boy was not injured but frightened to cry.Not wait long,the ambulance came.The mom was taken to hospital.In a result of tragedy,the dear mom died.
Life is fragile!
Now, I would(will) be very careful when crossing the road.If we all pay attention to safety, they(we) would have avoided a lot of traffic（加accident）.Also, if rural crossroads traffic lights are installed,（加they） will prevent several accidents.

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An Unforgettable Event
It happened many years ago, when I was thirteen years old.
It was a sunny day, and I walked along the road.There was a crossroad in front of me.A women who was ...

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An Unforgettable Event
It happened many years ago, when I was thirteen years old.
It was a sunny day, and I walked along the road.There was a crossroad in front of me.A women who was a mother,rode a bicycle, with a little boy.They wanted to go through the intersection.The speed was not fast.The intersection without traffic lights in rural seemed to be different from the town.That might cause a lot of tragedy.As I said,a truck loaded with goods also passed through junction.Suddenly, they hit together.the child's mother fall in a pool of blood. Luckily the boy was not injured, but frightened crying randomly.Soon, the ambulance came.The mother was taken to the hospital.After a few days I heard that the mother died.What a tragedy.Life is fragile!
Now, I would be very careful when crossing the road.If we all pay attention to safety, there would have avoided a lot of traffic accident.Also, if rural crossroad traffic lights are installed, it will prevent several accidents

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It happened when I was thirteen years old.
It was a sunny day. I walked along the road, and came across a crossroad.I saw a mother riding a bicycle with a little boy.They wanted to cross th...

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It happened when I was thirteen years old.
It was a sunny day. I walked along the road, and came across a crossroad.I saw a mother riding a bicycle with a little boy.They wanted to cross the intersection，and there were no traffic lights and no notices that tell people to slow down.Although the speed of the bike is not fast，at that moment，I had a expectation there may be some accidents happenning here .Fortunely for me，i was right。but unfortunately for the mother and her child
，a truck loaded with goods also passed through junction.Suddenly, the truck hit the mother with her boy and she fell in a pool of blood. Luckily the boy was not injured, but was frightened to cry desparately. Soon, the ambulance came.The mother was taken to the hospital. After a few days, I heard that the mother had died. What a tragedy. Life is fragile!
Now, I would be very careful when crossing the road.If we all pay attention to safety, we could have avoided a lot of tragedies.and
Also, if rural crossroads have traffic lights installed, they will prevent some possible accidents.

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