请各位英语大师帮小弟修改这篇英语作文(The birthday Present for My Mother)My mother is having a birthday soon.I would like to send her a book,because she is very fond of reading.Because it can make my mother happy.I hope it happy ever
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请各位英语大师帮小弟修改这篇英语作文(The birthday Present for My Mother)My mother is having a birthday soon.I would like to send her a book,because she is very fond of reading.Because it can make my mother happy.I hope it happy ever
请各位英语大师帮小弟修改这篇英语作文(The birthday Present for My Mother)
My mother is having a birthday soon.I would like to send her a book,because she is very fond of reading.Because it can make my mother happy.I hope it happy every day.
请各位英语大师帮小弟修改这篇英语作文(The birthday Present for My Mother)My mother is having a birthday soon.I would like to send her a book,because she is very fond of reading.Because it can make my mother happy.I hope it happy ever
My mother's birthday is coming .I want to give her a book as the birthday present.Because my mother is very fond of reading,and the book can make her happy.I hope my mother can happy every day.
1is going to have 2 把because 换成as 吧,意思没问题,就是觉得有些生硬,表原因的嘛。3我觉得因为有两个原因。你这样写比较好:I would like to send her a book as she's very fond of reading.I'm sure it would make her happy.4最后一句表意不清,要么你删了,要么换一句吧。比如希望...
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1is going to have 2 把because 换成as 吧,意思没问题,就是觉得有些生硬,表原因的嘛。3我觉得因为有两个原因。你这样写比较好:I would like to send her a book as she's very fond of reading.I'm sure it would make her happy.4最后一句表意不清,要么你删了,要么换一句吧。比如希望母亲健康,有一个快乐的生日之类。
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