帮我改下英语作文,不要有语法错,The world is so big ,whatˊs your wanted?Everyday,there are something to take place.What is your faith?When you are drinking a cup of coffee,maybe you will feel happy.Because you can relax youselves and enj

帮我改下英语作文,不要有语法错,The world is so big ,whatˊs your wanted?Everyday,there are something to take place.What is your faith?When you are drinking a cup of coffee,maybe you will feel happy.Because you can relax youselves and enj
帮我改下英语作文,不要有语法错,
The world is so big ,whatˊs your wanted?
Everyday,there are something to take place.What is your faith?When you are drinking a cup of coffee,maybe you will feel happy.Because you can relax youselves and enjoy your life.
At a weekend,I saw a mother and a daughter.They had sat in a open-air coffee shop.They looked very happy.The womanˊs mother is old.I donˊt think she likes coffee,but I am sure that she is very pleasant because of her daughter.
The love in life is the faith to them.
For all the love I found in life,that is the ture faith of us.
信仰，讲一对母女，女儿带着妈妈去咖啡馆，妈妈也许并不喜欢喝咖啡，但是有女儿陪着就觉得很快乐，而生活就是他们的信仰。生活中的爱就是最真的信仰。
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帮我改下英语作文,不要有语法错,The world is so big ,whatˊs your wanted?Everyday,there are something to take place.What is your faith?When you are drinking a cup of coffee,maybe you will feel happy.Because you can relax youselves and enj
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The world is so big ,what do your want?
Everyday,there are so many things to be done.What is your faith? When you are drinking a cup of coffee,maybe you can feel happy.Because you can relax youselves and enjoy your life for such a moment.
At a weekend,I saw a mother and her daughter.They sat in a open-air coffee shop.They looked very happy.The girl's mother is old.I donˊt think she likes coffee,but I am sure that she is very pleased because of her daughter.
The love is the faith of life to them.
Love make the world go round,that is the ture faith of us.

The world is so big ,what do you need?
Everyday,there are something to take place.What is your faith? When you are drinking a cup of coffee,maybe you will feel happy.Because you can relax youselve...

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The world is so big ,what do you need?
Everyday,there are something to take place.What is your faith? When you are drinking a cup of coffee,maybe you will feel happy.Because you can relax youselves and enjoy your life.
At a weekend,I saw a mother and a daughter.They sat in a open-air coffee shop.They looked very happy.The womanˊs mother is old.I donˊt think she likes coffee,but I am sure that she is very pleasant because of her daughter.
The love in life is the faith to them.
For all the love I found in life,that is the ture faith of us.

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错的实在太多了，而且不知道你的大意是什么= =