HELP~~英语作文修改,当晚要给出答案!Dear Bob, Hello!I am very happy got your letter and glad to be your friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I am fifteen.I am Chinese and I live in Shanxi. I am a middle school student.I like English and

HELP~~英语作文修改,当晚要给出答案!Dear Bob, Hello!I am very happy got your letter and glad to be your friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I am fifteen.I am Chinese and I live in Shanxi. I am a middle school student.I like English and
HELP~~英语作文修改,当晚要给出答案!
Dear Bob,
Hello!I am very happy got your letter and glad to be your friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I am fifteen.I am Chinese and I live in Shanxi.
I am a middle school student.I like English and I good at English.Because the English teacher is so fun.I like sports.My favourite sport is table tennis.I can play very well!You can go to watch my table tennis match!I good at drawing.I can draw many things.I can draw you,too.Ha!Ha!
I hear any about America.I can speak English very well!I hope I will visit your country one day.
你永远是我的好朋友（翻译成英语）

HELP~~英语作文修改,当晚要给出答案!Dear Bob, Hello!I am very happy got your letter and glad to be your friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I am fifteen.I am Chinese and I live in Shanxi. I am a middle school student.I like English and
Dear Bob,
Hello!I am very happy to hear from you and glad to be your friend.My name is Zhang Qiang.I am fifteen.I am Chinese and I live in Shanxi.
I am a middle school student.I like English and I good at English.Because the English teacher is so funny.I like sports.My favourite sport is table tennis.I can play it very well!You can come and watch my table tennis match!I good at drawing.I can draw many things.I can draw a picture of you,too.Ha!Ha!
I hear something about America.I can speak English very well!I hope I will visit your country one day.
Your are my forever friend!
Your sincerely
Zhang Qiang

做了点小改动,楼主参考下~分别在信内容的第一行,第四行第五行, I hear any about America.这句不知道楼主要表达什么意思,但是语法有错的~ 所以稍微修改了下~
有什么问题可以继续讨论哈~希望对你有帮助~

Dear Bob,
Hello! I am very happy to receive your letter and be your friend. My name is Zhang Qiang, and I'm fifteen. I am Chinese and live in Shanxi.
Now I am a middle school student...

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Dear Bob,
Hello! I am very happy to receive your letter and be your friend. My name is Zhang Qiang, and I'm fifteen. I am Chinese and live in Shanxi.
Now I am a middle school student. i like English and i'm good at English, because my English teacher is very funny. I like sports, and my favourite is table tennis. I can play it very well! You can come to watch my table tennis match. And I'm good at drawing, too. I can draw many things, including you.
I listen to many passages about America. And I can speak English very well. Hope I will visit your country one day.
You are my friend forever.

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Dear Bob.
Hello! I was so pleased to receive your letter. I am glad to be your friend. My name is Zhang Qiang, but you can call me Joe. I am fifteen. I am from Shanxi, China.
I am in middle sc...

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Dear Bob.
Hello! I was so pleased to receive your letter. I am glad to be your friend. My name is Zhang Qiang, but you can call me Joe. I am fifteen. I am from Shanxi, China.
I am in middle school. I like English because our English teacher makes learning English so much fun. My favourite sport is table tennis. I play table tennis with my friends on weekends. Maybe I can invite you to watch my tournament sometime in the future. Friends tell me I'm good at drawing. I take it as a hobby.
I heard a lot about America. Can you tell me more? I would love to hear something about yourself and perhaps I can visit you someday. Please write me soon.
You will always be my best friend. 你永远是我的好朋友。
Sincerely,
Zhang Qiang aka Joe

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