改正英语语法错误下面两段话如果有语法错误,请帮我改正一下.Bill Gates was born in 1955.In the years between 1995 and 2007,he was the richest man in the world.He was not only the founder of Microsoft,but also a philanthropist.H

改正英语语法错误下面两段话如果有语法错误,请帮我改正一下.Bill Gates was born in 1955.In the years between 1995 and 2007,he was the richest man in the world.He was not only the founder of Microsoft,but also a philanthropist.H
改正英语语法错误
下面两段话如果有语法错误,请帮我改正一下.
Bill Gates was born in 1955.In the years between 1995 and 2007,he was the richest man in the world.He was not only the founder of Microsoft,but also a philanthropist.He gave all his monney to the foundation which was built by him and his wife.
Microsoft is a company which develop operating system and software.The "windows" and "office" are very popular in the world.Almost all the computers are installed by the"windows".The "office" is very useful in many industry.

改正英语语法错误下面两段话如果有语法错误,请帮我改正一下.Bill Gates was born in 1955.In the years between 1995 and 2007,he was the richest man in the world.He was not only the founder of Microsoft,but also a philanthropist.H
Bill Gates was born in 1955.In the years between 1995 and 2007 (From 1995 to 2007),he was the richest man in the world.He was not only the founder of Microsoft,but is a philanthropist (as well).He gave all (of) his money to the foundation (built by his wife and him) which was built by him and his wife.
Microsoft is a company which develope(s) operating system(s) and software(s).The "Windows" and "Office" are very popular in the world.Almost all the computers are installed "Windows".The "Office" is very useful in many industry (industries).
The words in bracket are the ones I think should be correct.I hope this is helpful!=)

Microsoft is a company which develop operating system and software
应该是Microsoft is a company which develops operating system and software
Almost all the computers are installed with the"windows".
The "office" is very useful in many industries

year用单数

In the years =during years .
his wife and himself
Microsoft is a company which develops operating system and software
Almost all of computers were installed with it's Windows operating system
the office software is very useful in many industrIes.

In 1995 to 2007;founder改为invitor ;

“monney”应该是“money”

下边的都是怎么搞的...给别人纠错自己却犯了不少低级语法错误，真是不可理喻！我来吧！
Bill Gates was born in 1955.From 1995 to 2007, he became the richest man in the world. He was not only the founder of Microsoft,but also a philanthropist...

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下边的都是怎么搞的...给别人纠错自己却犯了不少低级语法错误，真是不可理喻！我来吧！
Bill Gates was born in 1955.From 1995 to 2007, he became the richest man in the world. He was not only the founder of Microsoft,but also a philanthropist.He gave all his monney to the foundation which was built by himself and his wife.
Microsoft is a company which develops operating system and software.The "windows" and "office" are very popular all over the world.Almost all the computers are installed by the"windows".Nowadays the "office" is widely used in many industries.

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