英语短文改错谁帮做下!I wonder if i can get some helps from you.I was so careful that i left my case on the no.213 train from beijing to tianjin in august 24th,2009.My case is square.it was made in china.it was brown in colour.i have my name

英语短文改错谁帮做下!I wonder if i can get some helps from you.I was so careful that i left my case on the no.213 train from beijing to tianjin in august 24th,2009.My case is square.it was made in china.it was brown in colour.i have my name
英语短文改错谁帮做下!I wonder if i can get some helps from you.I was so careful that i left my case on the no.213 train from beijing to tianjin in august 24th,2009.My case is square.it was made in china.it was brown in colour.i have my name and address on the case.Inside of the case,i have a umbrella,some books,two shirts,a cake of soap,a tube of toothpaste and a toothbrush.I either have a pair of trousers,a cup and apair of shoes.

英语短文改错谁帮做下!I wonder if i can get some helps from you.I was so careful that i left my case on the no.213 train from beijing to tianjin in august 24th,2009.My case is square.it was made in china.it was brown in colour.i have my name
helps改为help careful改为careless
in改为on ,was made 改为is made ,was 改为is
of 去掉,a改为an
either 改为also

I wonder if i can get some help from you. I was so careless that i left my case on No.213 train from beijing to tianjin on august 24th,2009. My case is square.it was made in china.it is brown in colo...

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I wonder if i can get some help from you. I was so careless that i left my case on No.213 train from beijing to tianjin on august 24th,2009. My case is square.it was made in china.it is brown in colour.i had my name and address on the case. Inside the case, there is an umbrella, some books, two shirts, a cake of soap, a tube of toothpaste and a toothbrush. there is also a pair of trousers, a cup and a pair of shoes.

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helps----help， careful----careless ， i left mycase ---had left， in august 24th,2009 in改成on ，i have my name and address ----have written ， Inside of the case of去掉， i have a umbrella, a改成an， either 改成also
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Hopefully, you can help me with my case. I was so careless that I lost my case on Train 213 from Beijign to Tianjin on Aug.24th, 2009. My case is square, brown, with my name and address on it. It wa...

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Hopefully, you can help me with my case. I was so careless that I lost my case on Train 213 from Beijign to Tianjin on Aug.24th, 2009. My case is square, brown, with my name and address on it. It was made in China, Inside of the case, there was an umbrella, some books, two shirts, a cake of soap, a tube of toothpaste and a toothbrush. I also had a pair of trousers, a cup and a pair of shoes in it.

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