初中英语小句子改错I'd love to attend the Expo as a volunteer to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.(1)I'm dymanic and honest.I have the high sense of responsibility.(2)I love Erhu Fiddle,painting,sports,movies and reading(这里要不

初中英语小句子改错I'd love to attend the Expo as a volunteer to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.(1)I'm dymanic and honest.I have the high sense of responsibility.(2)I love Erhu Fiddle,painting,sports,movies and reading(这里要不
初中英语小句子改错
I'd love to attend the Expo as a volunteer to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.
(1)I'm dymanic and honest.I have the high sense of responsibility.
(2)I love Erhu Fiddle,painting,sports,movies and reading(这里要不要加逗号）which can keep me energetic and fresh.
(3)I sincerely hope that you can give me the chance to study at this school.

初中英语小句子改错I'd love to attend the Expo as a volunteer to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.(1)I'm dymanic and honest.I have the high sense of responsibility.(2)I love Erhu Fiddle,painting,sports,movies and reading(这里要不
I'd love to attend the World Expo as a volunteer to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.
(1)I'm dynamic and honest.I have a strong sense of responsibility.
(2)I love erhu fiddle,painting,sports,movies and reading,which can keep me energetic and fresh.
(3)I sincerely hope that you grant me the chance to study at this school.
看看这样修改如何?
high sense是中国式英语,要避免.二胡英语不必大写.原文dynamic拼写错误.which引导非限制性定语从句,前面要有逗号.hope引起的祈使句要用原形动词.

要加逗号，没什么错误啊，很好啊。

不要加

(1)I'm dymanic and honest.I have a high sense of responsibility.
(2)I love Erhu Fiddle, painting,sports, movies and reading, which can keep me energetic and fresh.
(3)I sincerely hope that you can give me a chance to study at this school.

（1）你的那个dymanic用的不对吧。根本就没有那个词。
high sense 好像也有问题
（2）不用加逗号，因为后边是从句，并不是一个新的句子
（3）没问题，好像

1、"the high sense of responsibility"改为"a high sense of……"
2、如果你是想说Erhu Fiddle,painting,sports,movies and reading
能keep you energetic and fresh，就加逗号，要是只是说reading能的话，就不加

希望可以帮助到您。
I'd love to attend the Expo as a volunteer to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.
这一句是没有问题的。
(1)I'm dymanic and honest.I have the high sense of responsibility.
这一句把th...

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希望可以帮助到您。
I'd love to attend the Expo as a volunteer to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.
这一句是没有问题的。
(1)I'm dymanic and honest.I have the high sense of responsibility.
这一句把the改成a更好。
(2)I love Erhu Fiddle,painting,sports,movies and reading,which can keep me energetic and fresh.
这里最好还是加上一个逗号。
(3)I sincerely hope that you can give me the chance to study at this school.
这里的the换成a会更好，平常我们都说“给我一个机会”而不是“给我这个机会”。

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1 the--- a 有高度的责任感，用a
2 love---loving 动宾短语做主语，用ing形式
3 can---could hope后面跟虚拟语气