作业帮哪位高手帮我改这篇英语短文,一共10个错误In your school bags you have pencils,pens,a ruler or some books.Neither of these things grow in the field.they were all made in factories and invented someone.There have not always had pencils
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哪位高手帮我改这篇英语短文,一共10个错误In your school bags you have pencils,pens,a ruler or some books.Neither of these things grow in the field.they were all made in factories and invented someone.There have not always had pencils
哪位高手帮我改这篇英语短文,一共10个错误
In your school bags you have pencils,pens,a ruler or some books.Neither of these things grow in the field.they were all made in factories and invented someone.There have not always had pencils and pens,rulers and books Thousands years ago ,no one knew about these things,Who invented them?We do always know.There have been much thousands of inventions in the human history,Some of these inventions has changed the world,such as paper,printing and radio,and we know the inventors,And we have forgotten most of the other inventors.an example,who invented the clock,or the lock to the door?We do not know
哪位高手帮我改这篇英语短文,一共10个错误In your school bags you have pencils,pens,a ruler or some books.Neither of these things grow in the field.they were all made in factories and invented someone.There have not always had pencils
1,In your school bags you have pencils,pens,a ruler or some books.(or 改成 and,肯定句里表并列用and)
2,Neither of these things grow in the field.(Neither改成None,三者及以上中表否定用None,否则用neither）
3-4,they were all made in factories and invented someone.(they改成They,大写；invented by someone)
5-6,There have not always had pencils and pens,rulers and books .(have not 改成were not,去掉had,这是there be 句型,一定不能再加入have 表示有没有,因为本来there be 就是表示存在的)
7-8,There have been much thousands of inventions in the human history,Some of these inventions has changed the world(have been 改成are；these inventions改成which,定语从句应该取代掉先行词）
9,And we have forgotten most of the other inventors.（And 改成But,表转折）
10,an example（改成“For example”）