作业帮一篇高中英语作文,希望指导
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一篇高中英语作文,希望指导
一篇高中英语作文,希望指导
一篇高中英语作文,希望指导
看的我眼晕,你还不如直接把你的作文打上来.只看了你第一段的概括,下面的你的想家故事还没看.但是,感觉你写的不连贯.
虽然是让你第一段概括,但是,你的第二段起码要有点过渡好吧.同一篇文章,不同的段落间要有过渡.
建议,第一段,来个类似这样的句子,The artical was about the homesic experience of Sam,who .
接下来第二段,写你自己的想家的经历,你可以根据你要编的故事内容,来个类似这样的过渡句
Sam's story reminds me of my those gloomy days when.
不知道句式对你来说是否有点复杂,你可以找些简单的,写的时候记得行文要流畅连贯,段与段之间要有过渡,承上启下.
Sam suffered homesickness when he first started the boarding school. He felt like he didn't fit in and asked for sick leaves all the time. He even hated his parents for leaving him in the school.
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Sam suffered homesickness when he first started the boarding school. He felt like he didn't fit in and asked for sick leaves all the time. He even hated his parents for leaving him in the school.
When I first went to my junior-high school, I felt homesick because I had never been so far away from home.
It did affect my academic performance very much. I, from time to time, thought of food, TV shows, and computer games during the classes. What's worse was that I couldn't fall asleep at night because I would miss my bed at home for closing my eyes. Because of these reasons, my grades went from bad to worse.
However, my teacher noticed that I was having a hard time dealing with those problems. He talked to me to lighten my homesick when I felt uncomfortable. Moreover, I spent more time on readings and talked to my classmates after school. My classmates showed great concerning and tried to help out. It took a while, but I eventually fitted in my new school life.
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