帮我看看 有没有语法上的错误There are five people in my house:grandma,grandpa,father,mother and me.My mother is a teacher,father is a doctor.They are both busy working.Usually,only my grandma,grandpa and I at home.They all love me very mu

帮我看看 有没有语法上的错误There are five people in my house:grandma,grandpa,father,mother and me.My mother is a teacher,father is a doctor.They are both busy working.Usually,only my grandma,grandpa and I at home.They all love me very mu
帮我看看 有没有语法上的错误
There are five people in my house:grandma,grandpa,father,mother and me.My mother is a teacher,father is a doctor.They are both busy working.Usually,only my grandma,grandpa and I at home.They all love me very much.I am very fond of this home.
My household consists of five people.They are my grandmother,my grandfather,my father,my mother,and I.My mother is a school teacher.My father is a doctor.Both of my parents are busy with theirwork.Ordinarily I stay home with my grandmother and my grandfather.They love me very much.I love this home!
there are five people in my family,my grandfather,grandmather,father,mother and me.my mother is a teacher and my father,a doctor.they are both busy with their jobs.usually,i stay at home with grandpa and grandma and they like me very much.i love my family.
There are five people in my family.They are my grandparent、my parent and me.My mother is a teacher,my father is a doctor.They usually busy working.I and my grandparent at home as usual.
There are five people in my family,they are my grandma,grandpa,father,mother and me.My motheris a teacher,my father is a doctor,they are hustling and bustling everyday.Often,only me,grandma and grandpa at home.they love so much.I love my family.
哪个更好一些

帮我看看 有没有语法上的错误There are five people in my house:grandma,grandpa,father,mother and me.My mother is a teacher,father is a doctor.They are both busy working.Usually,only my grandma,grandpa and I at home.They all love me very mu
第三个比较好
There are five people in my family,my grandfather,grandmather,father,mother and me.my mother is a teacher and my father,a doctor.they are both busy with their jobs.usually,i stay at home with grandpa and grandma and they like me very much.i love my family.

缘分的聚是如此不易，在千万的偶然中相逢，
若说缘分是前世的法定，我愿以千年的等候，
期待与你再续前缘。
若说无缘、缘何相聚、若说有缘、缘尽何生，
天空虽然没有留下痕迹，但鸟儿已经飞过。
HOHO,自己看吧,这年头偷懒的人真不少...

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缘分的聚是如此不易，在千万的偶然中相逢，
若说缘分是前世的法定，我愿以千年的等候，
期待与你再续前缘。
若说无缘、缘何相聚、若说有缘、缘尽何生，
天空虽然没有留下痕迹，但鸟儿已经飞过。
HOHO,自己看吧,这年头偷懒的人真不少

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第三个比较好

第三个中“my mother is a teacher and my father”，不好。改为："my mother is a teacher as well as my father"比较好