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请会英文的帮我修改以下我写的这封信 帮我改文法句子什麼的我要写封信给家长 要介绍关於 陌生人的 (我选修的课是育保科 要写封给家长的信)请帮我看看我写的行不行 帮我排版 改错误文
请会英文的帮我修改以下我写的这封信 帮我改文法句子什麼的
我要写封信给家长 要介绍关於 陌生人的 (我选修的课是育保科 要写封给家长的信)
请帮我看看我写的行不行 帮我排版 改错误文法 句子 对我而言非常重要
Dear parents:
Thank you for your participation in
the daycare for last few months,we are glad that you were involves in children’s
daily life.Now,we want to introduce you some important message.
First,as you know,to be an
educator,it’s very important for us to help children understand what’s
dangerous,to teach them how to be safe and keep away from danger.
As parents and teachers,we need to
prepare our children to face dangers,for example,there is something that may
happen in children’s daily life,when children walk along,there may be a stranger
try to talk to them ,we have to teach our children how and when to call 911
during the emergency situation,and because we don’t want scare to children,so
we don’t say’’ never talk to strangers.’’ Instead we use positive language with
children.Like ‘’ most people are good,some people are bad,)
We are going to have some creative activity
to teach children how to organize the good people and bad people’s different
for next few months,we are going to read ‘’ Snow White’’ and ‘’ Little Red
Riding Hood’’ for children,we strongly encourages
parents come to join us we will have much fun in this activity ,we will
have role play and other interesting game and may ask children some question.
The purpose of this activity is to
help parents and children better understand about the stranger.
Our goal is to make a difference in
children’s lives and help guide them to make the right choices in their life,
give them a right direction to make a decision.Also,we want to provide a safe
and healthy environment for children.
We hope we have been able to create
an interesting learning environment for children explore and that it has been
an amazing experience to all of you.
We hope to see you again during next
few months.
By:

请会英文的帮我修改以下我写的这封信 帮我改文法句子什麼的我要写封信给家长 要介绍关於 陌生人的 (我选修的课是育保科 要写封给家长的信)请帮我看看我写的行不行 帮我排版 改错误文
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Dear parents:
Thank you for your participation in
the daycare for last few months, we are glad that you were involving in children’s
daily life. Now, we want to introduce you some importan...

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Dear parents:
Thank you for your participation in
the daycare for last few months, we are glad that you were involving in children’s
daily life. Now, we want to introduce you some important messages.
First, as you know, to be an
educator, it’s very important for us to help children understand what is
dangerous, to teach them how to be safe and stay away from danger.
As parents and teachers, we need to
get our children prepared to face dangers. Here is an example. There is something that may
happen in children’s daily life. When children walk along the street, there may be a stranger
trying to talk to them. We have to teach our children how and when to call 911
during the emergency, however because we do not want to scare our children, so
we should not say’’ never talk to strangers.’’ Instead we use positive words with
children like "most people are good, some people are bad".
We are going to have some creative activities
to teach children how to recoganize the difference between good people and bad people
in the following few months. We are going to read ‘’ Snow White’’ and ‘’ Little Red
Riding Hood’’ for children. We strongly encourages
parents to come to join us !! We will have lots of fun in this activity. We will
have role-playing,interesting game and prize-giving questions.
The purpose of this activity is to
help parents and their children understand about the stranger better.
Our goal is to make a difference in
children’s lives and to guide them in making the right choices in their lives, thus we can provide a safe
and healthy environment for children.
We hope we will be able to create
an interesting learning environment for children and that also will be
an amazing experience to all of you.
We hope to see you again during next
few months.

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Dear parents:
Thank you for your participation
Day care for the last few months, we are glad to have you learned aboutchildren
The daily life. Now, we want to introduce some important info...

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Dear parents:
Thank you for your participation
Day care for the last few months, we are glad to have you learned aboutchildren
The daily life. Now, we want to introduce some important information to you.
First of all, you know, is a
Educators, it is very important to us, to help children understand
The danger, to teach them how to safe from danger.
As parents and teachers, we need
Let our children away from dangerous, may face for example, possible
In the daily lives of children, when children go alone, there may be astrange
Try to talk to them, we need to teach our children how and when to call 911
In case of emergency, because we don't want to frighten children, so
We don't say "don't talk to strangers." We use positive language
Children. "Most people are good, some are bad,)
We will have some creative activity
Teach the child how to organize the good and the bad of different
In the next few months, we must let the child read "Snow White" and "Little Red Riding Hood
Little red riding hood".
We strongly encourage
Parents to join us! We will in this activity! There is a lot of fun, we will
A Cosplay and other fun games, you can ask them some questions.
The purpose of this activity is
Help parents and children about the stranger.
Our goal is to make different
The lives of children, to help them make the right choices in life,
The correct direction for them to make a decision. At the same time, we hope to provide a secure
On children's environmental health.
We hope we can create
To explore an interesting children's learning environment, it has
An amazing experience for everyone.
We hope to see you again

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were involved in children's daily life
we need to teach our children how to face dangers
there may be a stranger who try to talk to them
we don't want to scare our children
……to teach ...

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were involved in children's daily life
we need to teach our children how to face dangers
there may be a stranger who try to talk to them
we don't want to scare our children
……to teach children how to distinguish kind people and evil people
we strongly encourage parents to come to join us
……for children to explore and ……

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